beelikej: (Simon says)
[personal profile] beelikej
This is NC17, kids, not the cock-a-doodle-doo kind... "Julia removed her hand from the outside of his jeans and eased it down the front of her own waistband, her fingers easily meeting her pouting clit."

Huh?

Date: 2009-05-27 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sneaky-sena.livejournal.com
Maybe her clit was pouting because she didn't pay enough attention to it? Or maybe it was supposed to be pounding clit which, ew, is worse.

Date: 2009-05-29 09:04 pm (UTC)
ext_63196: (Huckleberry Finn)
From: [identity profile] beelikej.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think it was feeling left out, because she had been busy with her hands down someone else's pants just before. Based on the rest of the language I'm assuming pouting is what the author meant to write. I'm still baffled.

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